大学英语4级高分作文点睛

出版时间：2009-4  出版社：上海交通大学出版社  作者：吴玮翔，吴晓妹　主编  页数：200  

前言

　　根据《大学英语教学大纲》对写作的要求、《大学英语四级考试大纲》关于写作的规定及从1987年至今20多年40多套大学英语四级考试真题作文的分析，四级考试的短文写作几乎一成不变地遵循以下9个方面的考点，各有3个层次，故而把它称之为“三点式作文法”（3+3Approach）：　　本书按以下3大模块对四级考试短文写作作出多方位立体处理，笔者把它称之为“三位一体作文法”。　　笔者多年从事大学英语教学、大学英语四、六级强化教学、测试命题研究、测试解题策略研究，著有相关书籍50余本。本书应各地强化班学员要求，结合笔者多年四、六级作文强化教学体会，将多年讲稿经过内容上的增删整理，优化成册。旨在帮助立志写好英语4级考试短文、考好英语四级考试的学生提供一种可操作的多元写作操练模式，以在自己所期望的短期内突破英语四级考试作文大关，提高基础写作能力。　　最后需要提醒的是，尽管本书提供了一些行之有效的“章法”，但短文写作毕竟是实践性很强的一种能力，因此考生在学习本书所介绍的方法的同时，必须经常动动笔，以能做到熟能生巧。　　感谢美籍专家Linda Steven女士和澳籍专家John Hleasman对书中短文做了大量润色，使每篇短文在语言上都显得非常地道。

内容概要

本书介绍了大学英语4级考试作文的基本要求、评分标准和4级考试作文三位一体的微技能。包括语法、连贯、切题的要求，段落的展开、衔接、结尾；段落的构思、要点的选取、三段式的布局、4级作文的命题模块等。最后通过真题演示和背诵模块为读者提供大量的作文素材和范文。

书籍目录

评分标准基本要求三段式短文的特点与展开段落的展开、衔接与终结三句式段落展开法段落中的三个细节的选取篇章结构与展开模式命题形式及写作构思真题作文演示背诵填空模块话题背诵模块

章节摘录

　　It is well known that crime causes great harm to individuals andsociety.In a society where the rate of crime is high，people can no longergo on with their routine life in peace and security.They are constantlyworried by the dangers of murder，robbery，rape and other kinds ofcrimes.As a result，the whole of society is thrown into total disorder.　　So，in order to lcad a normal life in a peaceful society，it becomesnecessary to fight against crime.Governments have taken many measuresto keep crimes down by using more policemen and making more laws.Butthis alone cannot win the war.People should learn to protect themselvesand always be on guard.They should also take the trouble to educate theirchildren SO as to keep them on the right track.Moreover，as many crimesare caused by such social problems as racial discrimination，unemploymentand the great gap between the rich and the poor，the government shouldtake measures to address these problems and create a society of freedom，equality and justice.　　85.Go Sightseeing　　More and more Chinese people are fond of travelling.Tour ads fillnewspapers and magazines.Tourist agencies are found on many streets.On weekends，trains，buses and planes are packed with the excitedsightseers.Now some people start to travel abroad for pleasure.Tourismbenefits US in many ways.First，it is an important source of nationalrevenue,That’s why it is called“smokeless industry”.Second，it offersfurl Career people are tired of pressures produced by the quickening pace ofmodern life.By seeing the beautiful landscape of the country home andabroad。they get relaxed and widen their horizon of knowledge.Third，travelling offers challenge and opportunities of cultivating good character，such as independence，courage and strong-mindedness.Some things arenoteworthy.Security is the major concern for every tourist.Then we musthave a careful budget before our trip.Of course we should be kind to theenvironment where we should leave nothing but our footprint.　　86.Stop Smoking　　Smoking is harmful，as is proven by scientific research.However，there is still a great increase in the number of people who take up smoking.Medical science has now proved that smoking can cause lung cancer andother diseases.And it also increases the chances of having a heart attack.Smoking，therefore，is a definite threat to our health.　Giving up smoking is not easy.Many life-long smokers are never ableto quit it completely.Those who try to give up smoking often experiencedepression，severe headaches and sometimes gain a lot of weight as theyturh to food as a substitute.Some heavy smokers make up their minds toquit many times but every time they slip back into the oH habit.　　In order to protect non-smokers from the harm of smoke and preventthem from becoming smokers，measures should be taken to educate thepublic about the dangers of smoking.And cigarette companies should notbe allowed to advertise their products on television or radio，in newspapersor magazines.And again，the smokers should refrain from smoking inpublic places especially where there are nonsmokers，especially women andchildrerL　　87.Saving Energy at Home　　It was once believed that there were no limits to the energy needed.People assume it their right to heat a house without caring a second about how much energy is thus needed.Nowadays，people begin to associate anideal home with modern electrical appliances.This ideal，however，canturn out to be a nightmare if careful attention is not given to using energywisely.Having a home that uses too much energy can be a financial drainfor the owner and，in the long run，for the country.　　Many measures can be taken tO save energy.Here are somesuggestions.Make sure the lights are turned off when you leave the room.Use electricity-saving lights instead of ordinary ones.Be economical inusing water.Save the used water for flushing the toilet.Open the windowsto let in sufficient fresh cool air instead of using air-conditioner，and Dutmore clothes on instead of using the electrical heater to keep warm.Get upearly at sunrise to do the work you want to instead of staying up Iate atnight under the electric light.And above all，make sure that vou do yourjob at home with the least possible amount of energy involved.　　Owning a home today carries the responsibility to reduce the amount ofenergy required.By paying attention to the energy-saving methods withinyour reach，homeowners can save money for today and natural resourcesfor tomorrow.

编辑推荐

　　《考试桥丛书·考前冲刺热身系列：大学英语4级高分作文点睛》应各地强化班学员要求，结合笔者多年四、六级作文强化教学体会，将多年讲稿经过内容上的增删整理，优化成册。旨在帮助立志写好英语4级考试短文、考好英语四级考试的学生提供一种可操作的多元写作操练模式，以在自己所期望的短期内突破英语四级考试作文大关，提高基础写作能力。

用户评论 (总计15条)

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•   挺好的，例文也挺多的，希望能有帮助吧
•   速度很快哈！很满意，下次还来买哈！
•   正版很不错喔
•   对高三学生有一定帮助。
•   里面有很多范文,但是给的解析很少
•   把学校图书馆的书丢了，没回来赔给学校的
•   真的很一般，都是拼凑，没有很多的优势
•   看到此书，感觉实用性很强！
•   还得好好背背
•   有老师独到的分析与心得
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•   发来的书，跟旧书一样，但是将就着用吧，毕竟是看书的内容的
•   没什么特别的··